Forum Post: i talked about the occupy protest in my blog and the horrible way the police treated those freedom fighters
Posted 11 years ago on June 30, 2013, 9:18 a.m. EST by Huemannoun
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ok.... I'm super busy at moment ... but a quick couple suggestions....
second... what I first read... appeared good... except the first line...(imo) ... quote " im going to go ahead and suggest that our "first responders" are not heroes.."...
I don't understand that ???? are you comparing "first responders" to the idiot cop who sprayed people in the pic ?
if so.... that's a big mistake imo.... "first responders" references those public servants who first respond to an emergency... and they are hero's...
hope that helps... I'll read the rest ... if you add some paragraphs ;)