Forum Post: Hows this sound?
Posted 12 years ago on Sept. 28, 2011, 3:13 a.m. EST by npowell85
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from Montana City, Mt
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When a long train of abuses and usurpations, pursuing invariably the same Object evinces a design to reduce them under absolute Despotism, it is their right, it is their duty, to throw off such Government, and to provide new Guards for their future security.
We Americans here-by assert our duty to alter our current form of government. The abuses of the last two decades have led to vast inequality, and the destruction of the American middle-class. We require prompt action to right these injustices. Reform of the campaign finance system and the immediate end to the practice of lobbying and corporate campaign contributions is the only way by which this great nation can be saved.
good start. but you need a longer list of specific grievances. remember how the declaration of independence did it? Each grievance and then a remedy for each.