Forum Post: A very minor change suggestion to the front page EMERGENCY CALL TO ACTION news item
Posted 13 years ago on Oct. 13, 2011, 9:48 p.m. EST by Fex
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from Los Angeles, CA
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I suggest subtly changing this line: " ... we even have a Sanitation Working Group whose purpose this is."
Change "we even have" to "we have."
"We even have" sounds a little whiny. "We have" is asserting a strong fact.
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