Forum Post: 83 people died when they stormed the Bastille, a poem
Posted 13 years ago on Oct. 9, 2011, 5:14 a.m. EST by anonymous
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a revolutionary poem
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<P> unless you are willing to freeze to death
in the tiny square
in manhattan, ny
you should pack up your tiny pack
and go home.
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<P> it is not the 900 men
and maybe women
who won France for france
it is the 83
it was their parents’ rage stoked at a funeral
it was having somewhere to put it
revolution was a box
to put rage inside
and rage, like freedom is a force
almost always won by death
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<P> you should know
that the Bastille
is now only a foundation
and a foundation is built upon words
words are very important
but they never buy freedom
and never will
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<P> words
can be met by words
unlike life
which can be met by bullets
or fire
or water
or almost anything
the Constitution
is filled with words, too
as all Constitutions are and will be
but they are bent like ships
ablaze and melting into the sea
they are made crooked like arrows when they hit a tree
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<P> but, young man
or woman, maybe
if you make a cardboard sign that reads
I will freeze in this square
in manhattan, ny
come December
for freedom
then a frozen noose
may buy your homeland some air
tell then to bury you under the cobblestones there
under the bank
under the shadow of the cross at St. Paul’s
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<P> then, and only
will you have anything in common
with the unnamed soldier
who died at the side
of General George
and passed this nation on down to you
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<P> it’s always blood
that signs a document
it’s always blood
that wakes an old man from his dream
it’s always blood
that waters a cactus in another man’s desert
it’s always blood
bags of it, that keep the banks in business
it’s always blood
that the legs
tend to need
and it freezes
at twenty-seven degrees.
webmaster, please delete
somebody please kill me.
much better
edit out the excess html tags
I had not seen the rhythm before
you can't edit out your posts or I would've deleted all the other versions of this poem by now, or at least corrected the line breaks, and stanzas
that may be so origonal posts can't be "fixed" after people respond to them
for stanza breaks
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could work